ROBERTA ALLEN
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Story from OPEN CITY



SURREAL


When a drifter named Arturo, who is half-Peruvian and half-Costa Rican, flirted with an American painter he met at the pension where they were staying in San Jose, neither one had any idea that several days later they would wind up at the same time in a hard-to-reach coastal village across the Gulf of Nicoya and, within a few hours of their meeting, would be screwing under the stars on a broad stretch of beach outside of town.

Had she not been trying to cure herself of her obsession with a man back home her therapist described as wild and dangerous; and had she not seen the film Kafka with Jeremy Irons earlier that evening in the health food restaurant in this so-called "remote little fishing village", which is how her guidebook described it, she never would have gone off with this pock-marked, kinky-haired man, even though she thought he was sexy when she ran into him briefly that afternoon on the beach, where she was hating herself for having come to a place with, of all things, a health food restaurant and a projector to show American films, so college kids from the States, here to surf on winter break, could feel as though they hadn't left home.

In early evening, having run into her again, after learning that Chico's Bar & Restaurant, where he had expected to bartend for the season, had hired someone else, he invited her to have a beer with him and his pals, but when she accepted his invitation, he tried so hard to seduce her that she could only escape, as she saw it, by running off to see the film. Afterwards, however, she surprised and possibly scared not only him but herself, by returning, as she did, to the bar, which now looked as blue as the blue-tinted film, and saying to him in an ominous tone in front of his friends, "Let's take a walk."

On the beach, when Arturo raised himself off her still clothed body, he was unable, even with so many stars, to see the campers behind them in the bush - gringos he presumed - but he knew, having heard their hushed voices, that their tents were pitched behind the trees. He looked nervously in their direction before sliding off her shorts and underpants and tearing open the packet containing the condom he had pulled from his pocket when she announced that they had walked far enough from the village, and choosing this spot, away from the sea and close to the bush, lay down without hesitation on the sand.

"It's okay," she said, impatiently, not caring about the campers, waiting for him to unroll the condom, which he did, sliding it on slowly, his eyes still nervously searching for signs of movement, while she, still obsessed by the blue tint of the film which made everything surreal, wished, nevertheless, that he'd hurry up, as she lay there still hating herself, not only for choosing to come here, but also for seeing a film, which was against her rules while traveling, despite her fascination with the blue, which had seeped through her being - as she would later describe it to her therapist - the moment when she saw it on screen, long before the bar and the sand and the ocean foam and her skin and rumpled clothing and Arturo's chest, which she glimpsed only when his shirt flew open in the breeze, turned that same beautiful shade of blue, an indigo blue with deep red in it, the same blue she sees now bleeding like ink across the endless blotter of the sky. As she fastens her gaze on the blue, and the stars in between - hot and blinding as lights on a movie set - the sky wraps around her and the ocean's rhythm becomes her own, while the campers in the bush smirk and snicker, and Arturo, moving faster, unaware that she is part of the blue, lets out a low moan at the moment of release.

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Copyright © 2002 Roberta Allen.